tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6034855245900964602.post8137786867603669097..comments2023-12-27T14:13:16.127-05:00Comments on Spinning Straw Into Gold: Fairy Tale: GreenChristiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18107748184124761940noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6034855245900964602.post-68728939571131646352012-09-20T14:17:15.156-04:002012-09-20T14:17:15.156-04:00Feedback was:
"powdered sugar mist" is ...Feedback was:<br /><br />"powdered sugar mist" is too much<br /><br />He said I can do better than "aroma so rich she can taste it.<br /><br />And<br /><br />"the moon is devoured" works because "her husband carries out the baby" is so simple.<br /><br />I tell you this in hopes it can be beneficial to you and your writing as well. c:Christiehttp://spinstrawintogold.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6034855245900964602.post-22690173687184885512012-09-15T15:38:07.345-04:002012-09-15T15:38:07.345-04:00lemon curd moon is a particularly fine image thoug...lemon curd moon is a particularly fine image though I love coffee grounds soil as well Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6034855245900964602.post-53263905772268066372012-09-14T21:38:25.330-04:002012-09-14T21:38:25.330-04:00I don't think so at all! The food imagery made...I don't think so at all! The food imagery made it all the more tangible..I felt that if I read it too often, or too closely, it would come to life.Mashahttp://www.cyganeria-masha.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6034855245900964602.post-45154809632586247592012-09-12T23:17:20.948-04:002012-09-12T23:17:20.948-04:00I'm so glad. <3
It is very tasty--do you ...I'm so glad. <3<br /><br />It is very tasty--do you think I over did it with the food imagery? It was just a thing that happened, and I went with it!Christiehttp://spinstrawintogold.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6034855245900964602.post-19330077624252365832012-09-12T20:50:23.389-04:002012-09-12T20:50:23.389-04:00I LOVE this!
..not just that it's for me, or t...I LOVE this!<br />..not just that it's for me, or that I feel so very known in it, but the whole taste of it. I read it last night and it just hovered around me all day today.<br /><br />It reads like magic. Beautiful!!Mashahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06943998810222103926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6034855245900964602.post-32854199349729462562012-09-12T09:25:04.026-04:002012-09-12T09:25:04.026-04:00Thank you, miss! Are you back from India?Thank you, miss! Are you back from India?Christiehttp://spinstrawintogold.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6034855245900964602.post-12241065581788691652012-09-12T04:35:30.521-04:002012-09-12T04:35:30.521-04:00Wow, what emotive imagery, it makes me want to bak...Wow, what emotive imagery, it makes me want to bake and dig the garden at the same time! You've got a beautiful way with words, I hope you'll share the finished story too xxA.L. Lovedayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16205189160121469082noreply@blogger.com